Hi, I need an appeal letter for UCLA.
I have written about 300 words of essay, but it is not well organized nor finalized. I will tell you the storyline and what I want to write about, so I want you to make it about 550 words worth essay with organized and finalized one.
(I am an international dreamt to work in the sports industry when I grow up. I wanted to specifically become a contract manager of sports player, and I think UCLA fits me the best. To become a contract manager, I personally think analyzing numbers and communicating skills are mendatory to acquire. UCLA got both good statistic major, and communication major, so I will be able to take quality classes at UCLA, so I think it perfectly fits me. Also I want to major in economics and there is a professor named Lee Ohanian who teaches economics in sports and has the career that is really similar to what i want to become in the future. I really want to take his class after joining the UCLA.) These are basically my storyline. I strongly want to emphasize that I am currently admitted to UCSD and UCSB, but I think that UCLA fits me the most. Also my major is going to be the economics, so the part where is talks about economics and the professor will be the most important appeal of this essay.
Thank you