Post your Biodiversity Literature Review Paper introduction paragraph here for feedback. This is not your entire paper, just your intro paragraph. Include your citations, cited in the paragraph and at the end. Then, choose one student that does not have any feedback under their original post and respond with two specific aspects/parts of their work you found interesting or enjoyable and one specific, actionable piece that could be improved upon. Think about the logic, argument, and reputability of the information presented. Do they have a thesis statement in their introduction? Is their introduction free of me, my or I statements? Is all information cited correctly in CSE Name Year Style?
Feedback and critique makes us all better at everything, but it can be hard to receive. Make sure you are using the utmost care and consideration in your language and never make it personal, it is always about the work not the person. The critique needs to be a minimum of 150 words.